Success in formal "pen and paper" examinations is often seen to be a sign of intelligence. To what extent do you agree with the view that formal examination measures

previouslyً, "pen and

paper

" examinations

was

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popular with

people

and believed that it could be a sign of

intelligence

, as

such

,

intelligence

could be estimated through it. In my point of view, I do not agree with

this

opinion for some reasons. On the one hand , many

people

agree with

this

statement for many important

reason

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. The most significant is that many

people

measures

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the

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intelligence

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by

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pen and

paper

with

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in

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the traditional way

for example

some

of

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contraries do the exam

paper

when

apply

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to

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for

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job

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jobs

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and high

grade

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grades

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choose them . On the other

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hand

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hands

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many individuals disagree with

this

explanation for many critical reasons the most significant is that

people

have their own cleverness,

therefore

, there are many kinds of

intelligence

in the world.

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addition

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the kinds of

intelligence

are expressed through

characteristics

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the characteristics

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of humans. I think

pan

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and

paper

examination

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examinations

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not

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do not

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measure

intelligence

for example

, some

children

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intelligence

for for visual,

kinthstaic

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and kinthstaic

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. On the one hand, a test is not good enough to meet some criteria

such

as quality and supervisory process.

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,

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In reality, there is an increase

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in

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the rate of cheating among pupils

such

as using the telephone or holding back documents in the exam room.

In

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instance the current scenario, most

of

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the

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companies are considering marks just as an eligibility criterion and nothing else. They are highly concentrating on the practical skills and vocational training that an individual has been through. The interviewers

are preferring

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a candidate with relevant practical experience

than

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just good marks because as per corporates, an intelligent person is the one who can survive and generate profit in the business world, and

this

is altogether impossible without practical knowledge.

For instance

, many known businessmen have never been to B-School and with their intellect, they are ruling the business In conclusion,

although

both views have their own

benefit

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l still strongly believe that

paper

and pen

not

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measure

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a measure

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of

intelligence

.