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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how much
people
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 in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. The graph is divided into 3 categories of
class
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 : poorest, middle-income,
richest
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and richest
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.
Overall
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, the trend
of
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between
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United
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the United
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 States and
United
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the United
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 Kingdom is
opposite
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the opposite
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. In the US, as
people
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 can earn more money, the usage of
fuel
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 goes down.
Conversly
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Conversely
, in the UK, rich
people
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 use
fuel
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 more than poor
people
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. The lowest
class
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 in
US
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the US
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 spend 4% of their income on
fuel
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.
In addition
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, in the poorest group, the highest percentage of
fuel
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 usage is over 5%.
However
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,
portion
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a portion
the portion
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 of using petrol
is keep
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keeps
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 going down, when the
class
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 is getting higher. The richest
people
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 only use less than 3% of their
earness
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earnings
.
On the other hand
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,
UK's
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the UK's
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 trend is totally different. The poorest
people
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 almost don't use
fuel
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. Rather, the highest usage of
fuel
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 is
showed
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shown
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on
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in
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 the middle-income
class
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 and rich
class
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. They are spending 3~4% of their income.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, class, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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