You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
line graph illustrates the average monthly change in the prices of metals during 2014. There are three kinds of metals in the graph which are Copper, Nickel and Zinc.
Overall
, all three lines fluctuated a lot during a
year. Correct article usage
the
However
, there is a similar trend in
here. Until June, a percentage Change preposition
apply
changness
in Correct your spelling
change
changes
price
compared with previous
month, keep decreasing. After June, it increased a little bit and Add an article
the previous
keep
that figure until Wrong verb form
kept
Sepetember
. From September to October, the gap with Correct your spelling
September
prior
month declined, but it rose after October.
Nickel's trend is the most Correct article usage
the prior
fluctuated
trend among Wrong verb form
fluctuating
of
them. In January, the Change preposition
apply
price
rose 6% more than December,
2013. Remove the comma
apply
And
In June, the Correct word choice
apply
price
dropped 3
% compared to the Change preposition
by 3
price
of
May.
Copper's Change preposition
in
price
increased 3
% in February but it declined Change preposition
by 3
unitl
October and Correct your spelling
until
then
it surged 2% more at then
end of 2014.
The gap with Correct your spelling
the
last
year
December of Nickel was 2%, and it recovered in DecemberChange noun form
year's
,
2014.Remove the comma
apply
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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