The diagram below displays the production of a lead pencil.

The diagram

provides

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shows

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how

action

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the action

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of producing pencils

that

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apply

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affect

Correct subject-verb agreement

affects

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the use of different stages and equipment.

Overall

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,there are 12 steps beginning from the growing the tress and ending with the complex

consequence

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consequences

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. As we can see,the first line draws, that it takes 4

month

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months

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before being reported.Later,after 3 years

there

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they

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are turned to thinner. Following that,wood

is bring

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is brought

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down and transported to the workshop.

Then

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the slats are created within cut into. At the next step of the process after 60 days the staff

make

Wrong verb form

made

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grooves they

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

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started glueing the black lead into the groove, and the new slat

looks

Wrong verb form

looked

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like a sandwich.Next stage the skilled employee

cut

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cuts

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,

paint

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paints

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,

sharpen

Correct subject-verb agreement

sharpens

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and

stamp

Correct subject-verb agreement

stamps

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the pencils.

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,the new pencils are wrapped in boxes and go to stores where people buy and employ

it

Correct pronoun usage

them

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for their correct position.