The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The given pie charts compare information about the percentage of spending habits on 7 different items in 2 various years( 1971 and 2001). It is obvious, that in the first
year
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year,
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food
and
cars
were important things that people spent money on;
however
, in the second year
cars
and
food
changed their position.
According to
the 1971 diagram, dishes the first item that people spent money on had 44%;
moreover
, the second one was
cars
which the number of were half of the
food
;
then
other categories except
computers
had roughly the same proportion;
furthermore
,
finally
,
computers
which was the
last
one had 2 per cent. The plot of 2001 illustrates the figure for all things reduced except
cars
, restaurants, and
computers
. the car percentage climbed to nearly the same as
food
in 1971;
nevertheless
,
food
declined to 14% which was equal to the amount of restaurants.
In addition
,
computers
had a 10% rise, yet furniture, petrol, and books respectively1%, 2%, and 5% fell.
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