The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The given pie charts compare information about the percentage of spending habits on 7 different items in 2 various years( 1971 and 2001).
It is obvious, that in the first
year
Add a comma
year,
food
and Use synonyms
cars
were important things that people spent money on; Use synonyms
however
, in the second year Linking Words
cars
and Use synonyms
food
changed their position.
Use synonyms
According to
the 1971 diagram, dishes the first item that people spent money on had 44%; Linking Words
moreover
, the second one was Linking Words
cars
which the number of were half of the Use synonyms
food
; Use synonyms
then
other categories except Linking Words
computers
had roughly the same proportion; Use synonyms
furthermore
, Linking Words
finally
, Linking Words
computers
which was the Use synonyms
last
one had 2 per cent.
The plot of 2001 illustrates the figure for all things reduced except Linking Words
cars
, restaurants, and Use synonyms
computers
. the car percentage climbed to nearly the same as Use synonyms
food
in 1971; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, Linking Words
food
declined to 14% which was equal to the amount of restaurants. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
computers
had a 10% rise, yet furniture, petrol, and books respectively1%, 2%, and 5% fell.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, cars, computers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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