The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares data about the number of people visiting three different Museums from 2007 to 2012 per million annual visitors. It is obvious National Gallery
instead
of other places which had waved
trend
has been the popular place that visitors liked to see because the
trend
was increasing.
According to
the plot, Victoria and Albert Museum, which was the first place that tourists preferred to watch, had 13 in 2007;
moreover
, in 2008 the figure was the same as
last
year;
then
the number of people reduced enormously to 7 in 2010, that was the minimum, but after that, the number climbed marginally to 10 in 2012.
In addition
, the British Museum, the second one, had the same
trend
as the Victoria and Albert Museum at the beginning had a 12, and
this
place reached its lowest point in both 2008 and 2009 by 6;
however
, it was true that it hit 14.
Nevertheless
, in 2007, people did not like the national gallery
due to
the fact it had 6, yet the
trend
rose slightly to 11 in both 2011 and 2012. Later
finally
, touched the 16 in 2012.
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