The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the recycling Linking Words
process
of Use synonyms
glass
and plastics.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are two types of processes and they are operated in seven main stages respectively, beginning with gathering Linking Words
glass
and plastic waste and ending with reforming new items.
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Initially
, waste Linking Words
glass
and plastics are gathered and brought by truck to a recycling Use synonyms
center
within 5 to 10 days. At the Change the spelling
centre
centers
, Change the spelling
centres
glass
is categorized by its Use synonyms
color
, Change the spelling
colour
while
plastic is sorted by its shapes and conditions. Linking Words
Glass
is Use synonyms
subsequently
crushed, washed and melted, Linking Words
whereas
plastics are combined and shaped into rectangles before the crushing Linking Words
process
begins.
Following melting, Use synonyms
glass
is reformed using a single machine, Use synonyms
whereas
in the plastic Linking Words
process
, there are two machines to melt and reshape respectively. The reformed materials become new products which can be used in our daily lives. After 3 to 8 weeks, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
starts again and it is operated repeatedly.Use synonyms
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