The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the recycling process
of glass
and plastics.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are two types of processes and they are operated in seven main stages respectively, beginning with gathering glass
and plastic waste and ending with reforming new items.
Initially
, waste glass
and plastics are gathered and brought by truck to a recycling center
within 5 to 10 days. At the Change the spelling
centre
centers
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centres
glass
is categorized by its color
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colour
while
plastic is sorted by its shapes and conditions. Glass
is subsequently
crushed, washed and melted, whereas
plastics are combined and shaped into rectangles before the crushing process
begins.
Following melting, glass
is reformed using a single machine, whereas
in the plastic process
, there are two machines to melt and reshape respectively. The reformed materials become new products which can be used in our daily lives. After 3 to 8 weeks, this
process
starts again and it is operated repeatedly.Submitted by dksrlgus1017 on
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