The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph depicts the proportion of
exports
from Australia to Japan, the United States, China
, and India between 1990 and 2021. Overall
, it is readily apparent that Australian
exports
to China
and the United States experienced a decline, while
the volume of Australian
exports
to China
and India increased over the same period.
In the beginning, Japan was the top Australian
product importer, having over a quarter of the country's total exports
as made-in-Australia. However
, the amount gradually declined to 20% in 1995 and approximately 18% in 2000 and 2005 before levelling off at 15% in 2010 until 2012. Similarly
, the Australian
-imported products in the US had a downward trend, as around 10% share of this
country's imported products came from Australia, and the figure fluctuated and plummeted to 5% in 2010; despite the fall, it was able to rise the figure to around 5% at the end
of the period.
On the contrary
, China
and India imported the lowest proportion of Australian
commodities, with less than 5% of both countries' imports coming from Australia. However
, toward the end of the period, these two countries experienced an upward trend. China
had a drastic jump in the proportion of Australian
-imported products in the country, surpassing Japan in 2007, and peaked at just under 30% in 2012.Submitted by emteeme on
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