You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the

city

planner of the

city

of Brandfield, and the

city

concludes

Verb problem

decided

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to build the two sites,

shopping

Correct article usage

a shopping

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mall,

while

the s1 and s2 have been proposed by the

city

. The main difference between the two sites is that S1 is near the

river

,

whereas

S2 is beside the

railway

and industrial

estate

. The sites can

also

compare

Wrong verb form

be compared

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with the access that can be used by road or

railway

. Looking at the information in more detail, S1 is in the north of Brandfield, nearest to the housing

estate

, and it is so close to the

river

when

Correct word choice

that

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the people must cross the

railway

to reach the

city

center

Change the spelling

centre

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,

and

Correct word choice

apply

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Golf Center and park.

Furthermore

, the people can go to the industrial

estate

, but all of them must cross the

river

. Based on the map that

provides

Wrong verb form

is provided

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. S2 is nearest to the

railway

, and the location is in the

south east

Correct your spelling

southeast

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. The location of S2 indicated that it was very far from the housing

estate

in the north. People should cross the road and the

river

to reach the golf course and park

while

the industrial

estate

is not really far from the S2.