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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The map illustrates the
development
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 of
Chorleywood
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village
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 from 1868 to 1994, highlighting key periods and infrastructure changes. From 1868 to 1883,
development
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 was limited, as indicated by the small area shaded for
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 period.
During
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 1883 to 1922, expansion continued, with the
village
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 growing significantly along the main road. The construction of the railway in 1909 was a pivotal moment,
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 stimulating growth between 1922 and 1970, with new areas developing around
Chorleywood
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 Station and along the railway line. The motorway built in 1970 marked another phase of
development
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. From 1970 to 1994, the
village
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 expanded
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, with new areas emerging near the motorway and filling in the gaps between previously developed sections.
Chorleywood
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 Park and Golf Course remained a central green space throughout
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 period.
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,
Chorleywood
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's growth can be attributed to key transportation developments, including the main road, railway, and motorway, facilitating access and encouraging residential expansion. The map clearly shows how infrastructure improvements over time have influenced the
village
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's expansion and
development
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words development, chorleywood, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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