The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The flow chart provides key information about the stages involved in the production of instant
noodles
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the instant noodles
manufacturing process is a complex, multi-stage procedure starting from mixing raw ingredients and ending with
labelling and sealing of the product. In addition
, the initial steps focus on mixing the flour with other ingredients, whereas
the latter stages involve a series of further
cooking and spicing.
According to
what is shown, the first step includes transferring the flour from the track to the storagesilos. Then
, the flour is mixed with oil as well as
water by using the mixer. The new mixer is transferred to dough sheets by using rollers.
In terms of making the noodles
discs, the mixer undergoes dough strips where the discs are formed. After
this
, following the forming phase, the noodles
are cooked with oil and then
dried. Finally
, the product is filled into cups and then
seasoned with spices and added vegetables subsequently
, the cups are labelled and ready for sealing.Submitted by marim.almualim on
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