An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alterntive arrangements.

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Dear Roop, I hope you're doing well. I was really excited to meet you at the airport but

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will not be there at that time

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work responsibilities. As you know , I am working as an assistant manager in the Family Restaurant and my supervisor going on vacation for two weeks . Sadly, he will be going on

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day that you are arriving . He assigned me a lot of responsibilities and technicians will be coming on

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day to fix lighting and kitchen

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. Anyway, I am planning

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my house , and our friends from our high school

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the weekend. You don't need to worry about my schedule because I booked

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match already as we both are

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, you can come

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my house any time . Let me know if you have another plan . Well! I am dying to

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you . Have a safe flight. Best wishes, Roopkamal

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task achievement

The letter addresses the main tasks: explaining the situation and offering alternative arrangements.

tone

The tone is appropriate and friendly, making it suitable for a letter to a friend.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

172 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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