An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alterntive arrangements.

Dear Roop, I hope you're doing well. I was really excited to meet you at the airport but
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will not be there at that time
due to
work responsibilities. As you know , I am working as an assistant manager in the Family Restaurant and my supervisor going on vacation for two weeks . Sadly, he will be going on
same
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day that you are arriving . He assigned me a lot of responsibilities and technicians will be coming on
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day to fix lighting and kitchen
equipments
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. Anyway, I am planning
welcome
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a welcome
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party
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my house , and our friends from our high school
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joining
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on
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the weekend. You don't need to worry about my schedule because I booked
hockey
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a hockey
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match already as we both are
biggest
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fan
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of hockey
team
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.
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this
, you can come
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my house any time . Let me know if you have another plan . Well! I am dying to
meeing
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meeting
meet
you . Have a safe flight. Best wishes, Roopkamal
kaur
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grammar
Avoid minor grammatical errors and ensure consistent punctuation to improve overall readability.
coherence
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea to enhance coherence.
task achievement
The letter addresses the main tasks: explaining the situation and offering alternative arrangements.
tone
The tone is appropriate and friendly, making it suitable for a letter to a friend.

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