The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the day-to-night steps of the generation of
electricity
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from a hydroelectric power station.
Firstly
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, the river flows into the high-level
reservoir
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which is blocked by a dam to preserve
water
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. During the daytime, when the intake below the dam is open, the
water
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flows from the high-level
reservoir
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through reversible turbines in the power station which operate as generators to the low-level
reservoir
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. As turbines spin
while
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water
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runs through, they will generate
electricity
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which will later be transmitted to the national grid through power lines and
then
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be distributed for use.
In contrast
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, during the nighttime, reversible turbines work in a reserve way, which means they will pump
water
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back into the high-level
reservoir
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from the lower one as the intake of the dam is closed. As the diagram displays, the generation of
electricity
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from hydroelectric stations does not involve any procedure
that is
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harmful to nature. In conclusion, it is an environmentally friendly way to produce
electricity
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, reservoir, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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