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The graph illustrates the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged in the period 5 to 15
years
old.
the information by selecting and reporting the five categories , and make
comparisons were relevant.
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making
As
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Overall
overall
that the bus marked
increased to 40 approximately in the period to 50 Replace the word
mark
years
ago .
On one
hand in the first ten Correct article usage
the one
years
the taxi enormous increase
to to 10 Replace the word
increased
percentage
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per cent
while
waking decreased sharp
to 10 in Change the adjective
sharply
first
Correct article usage
the first
years
. whereas
there was pluateua
the Correct your spelling
plateau
trian
for 50 Correct your spelling
train
years
.on the other hands
there was Fix the agreement mistake
hand
Correct article usage
a rose
rose
Replace the word
rise
raiply
Correct your spelling
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
approximately
30%.Change preposition
by approximately
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