The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in the years 1980 and 2015, showing the modernization of the facilities that took place.
Overall
, there were some notable changes to the buildings and amenities in this
area
.
In 1980, this
area
had a combination of residential and industrial features
, but over the thirty-five year
period, these Add a hyphen
thirty-five-year
features
were reduced. Whereas
, in 1980 there was a grocer’s shop and a block
of flats located below the hotel, but by 2015 they were demolished, and a new ring road
was constructed through this
area
. Moreover
, a block
of terraced houses
located near the hotel in 1980, was knocked down to make way for a car park and a supermarket, which were built near the new road
in 2015.
Another noticeable change by 2015 was the development of recreational features
. A park was developed between the new block
of terraced houses
and the ring road
. The block
of terraced houses
was constructed on what had previously been an empty green area
, located below the road
and above a section where houses
were located.
To sum up
, the area
was extensively renovated, going through significant modernization of its commercial and residential features
. In addition
to this
, recreational facilities also
appeared in the town.Submitted by aakbarov2010 on
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