The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in the years 1980 and 2015, showing the modernization of the facilities that took place.
Overall
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, there were some notable changes to the buildings and amenities in
this
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area
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. In 1980,
this
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area
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had a combination of residential and industrial
features
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, but over the
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period, these
features
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were reduced.
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, in 1980 there was a grocer’s shop and a
block
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of flats located below the hotel, but by 2015 they were demolished, and a new ring
road
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was constructed through
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area
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.
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, a
block
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of terraced
houses
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located near the hotel in 1980, was knocked down to make way for a car park and a supermarket, which were built near the new
road
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in 2015. Another noticeable change by 2015 was the development of recreational
features
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. A park was developed between the new
block
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of terraced
houses
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and the ring
road
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. The
block
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of terraced
houses
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was constructed on what had previously been an empty green
area
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, located below the
road
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and above a section where
houses
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were located.
To sum up
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, the
area
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was extensively renovated, going through significant modernization of its commercial and residential
features
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.
In addition
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to
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, recreational facilities
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appeared in the town.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, features, block, road, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Outskirts
  • Urban expansion
  • Infrastructure development
  • Population density
  • Land use transformation
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Green spaces
  • Transportation options
  • Comparison
  • Key development
  • Redevelopment
  • Rural to urban transition
  • Expansion of facilities
  • Infrastructure upgrade
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