The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the recycling process of
glass
and
plastic
goods.
Overall
, it can be concluded that
,
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the reprocessing of
plastic
materials is
time consuming
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compared to
glass
containers. And, of course,
same
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equipment can be used in different stages of
the
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plastic
regeneration
in contrast
to that in the recycling of
glass
containers. First and foremost, we need to collect the already used
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materials
to
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lump
sum
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for about five to ten days and
then
trasported
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to a recycling centre, where they are sorted out to
seperate
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separate
plastic
and
glass
vessels from them.
However
,
glass
containers are divided based on colour
while
glass
items
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classified by thickness and quality factors. The collection of
plasic
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plastic
is bundled and
then
subjected to shredding. The
shreded
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shredded
pieces are later washed out to remove any form of impurities and
then
undergone
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the process of melting. After melting, the product can be reshaped to the design of our desire .Melting and reshaping steps
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same
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machinery. After a span of 3 to 8 weeks, the new products so formed are to be released into the market.
On the other hand
, the sorted
glass
goods are crushed into small pieces which are subjected to the sequential steps of washing, melting and reshaping, identical to that in the recycling of
plastic
goods.
However
, the equipment for melting and
reshping
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reshaping
is different
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to that in
plastic
reprocessing.The new products so formed are
then
marketed and are ready for use.
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