The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the recycling process of
glass
and plastic
goods.
Overall
, it can be concluded that,
the reprocessing of Remove the comma
apply
plastic
materials is time consuming
compared to Add a hyphen
time-consuming
glass
containers. And, of course, same
equipment can be used in different stages of Add an article
the same
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
regeneration in contrast
to that in the recycling of glass
containers.
First and foremost, we need to collect the already used up
materials Change preposition
apply
to
lump Change preposition
into
sum
for about five to ten days and Fix the agreement mistake
sums
then
trasported
to a recycling centre, where they are sorted out to Verb problem
transport them
seperate
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separate
plastic
and glass
vessels from them. However
, glass
containers are divided based on colour while
glass
items were
classified by thickness and quality factors.
The collection of Wrong verb form
are
plasic
is bundled and Correct your spelling
plastic
then
subjected to shredding. The shreded
pieces are later washed out to remove any form of impurities and Correct your spelling
shredded
then
undergone
the process of melting. After melting, the product can be reshaped to the design of our desire .Melting and reshaping steps Wrong verb form
undergo
involves
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involve
same
machinery. After a span of 3 to 8 weeks, the new products so formed are to be released into the market.
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the same
On the other hand
, the sorted glass
goods are crushed into small pieces which are subjected to the sequential steps of washing, melting and reshaping, identical to that in the recycling of plastic
goods. However
, the equipment for melting and reshping
is different Correct your spelling
reshaping
contrast
to that in Change preposition
in contrast
plastic
reprocessing.The new products so formed are then
marketed and are ready for use.Submitted by sivaleelamahendra1214 on
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