The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a species of big fish called the
salmon
. Overall
it is evident that this
fish go
Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
thought
Correct your spelling
through
stage
Correct article usage
a stage
to
growth starting with swamps and ending in Change preposition
of
ocean
.
Correct article usage
the ocean
Firstly
this
tainy salmon
first growth
in the swamps and Replace the word
grew
eat
the small plan Wrong verb form
ate
then
want
to see Wrong verb form
wanted
and
increase Correct your spelling
an
size
on the other Change preposition
in size
hands
it was increased marked numbers of Fix the agreement mistake
hand
salmon
whereas
someone go to ocean
and Add an article
the ocean
other
go Fix the agreement mistake
others
to
far Replace the word
too
way
. Correct your spelling
away
While
other of
Change preposition
apply
salmon
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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