The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The presented two maps illustrate the change of the town of Langley in two different years( 1910 and 1950). It is obvious, that the city was developing, and the facilities that helped people to improve their lives increased;
moreover
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, the air pollution was reduced.
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the pictures, in the first year, most of the inhabitants had houses, but in 1950, people lived in Flats and Sherman mansions.
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, in 1950, the number of streets and shops climbed
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of 1910. The plans demonstrate it is important that the factory is destroyed and they build a new park which has an area for children, a lake, and a vegetation zone;
furthermore
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, the
last
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time
this
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region had a lot of wastelands;
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, the fact that in the new areas, we can see citizens could use every space.
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, not only the Railway line but
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the worker cottages that did not look good transport to another district.
Nevertheless
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, the things the same as past were Laundry and Cafe'.
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