You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item: - give details about the order you made - explain what was wrong with the item -tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear, manager
Before, I want to say thank you, for your express delivery process. But I have a
complain
about Replace the word
complaint
that
items, which you sent me. Correct determiner usage
the
Actually
I was glad, to receive Add a comma
Actually,
so
fast. Correct pronoun usage
it so
Because my
order confirmation was just on Monday, and I Correct word choice
My
had
received Unnecessary verb
apply
after
two days for free shipping.
I did order a bestseller Correct pronoun usage
it after
books
package
for not
less price. Unfortunately, after I unpackaged them I have disappointed to Correct your spelling
no
saw
my order. In view Wrong verb form
see
on
the fact, the book missed out of Change preposition
of
package
. In the
your website posted about the bestseller Change preposition
The
books
package
's price 230USD
, and every Change preposition
of 230USD
package
comes ten
storybooks. But it Change preposition
with ten
hasn't
that, at least two Verb problem
isn't
books
missed
, Add a missing verb
were missed
Also
some books
were used.
Therefore
what I sould
do it? Is it possible Correct your spelling
should
could
would
refund
it after unpackage? Could you tell the seller companyFix the infinitive
to refund
.
I want to buy a new Change the punctuation
?
package
with
Change preposition
apply
full
wrapped, Or I request them Change the adjective
fully
refund
my money.
I hope you, Add the particle
to refund
I
can help me. Please.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly and ensure that each paragraph deals with a single idea. This will improve coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
Re-read your letter to correct grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. This will enhance the clarity of your message and improve task achievement.
suitable writing tone
A polite and respectful tone was maintained throughout the letter.
task achievement
All points mentioned in the task (details of the order, what was wrong, and what you want the company to do) were adequately addressed.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,