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The charts below shows the percentage of two genres of TV programmes watched by male and female in Australia.

The charts below shows the percentage of two genres of TV programmes watched by male and female in Australia.
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The charts below
shows
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show
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 the percentage of two genres of TV programmes watched by
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 in Australia. We can see in
this
 chart’s information four different age groups between 16 and 45+. From 35 to 45
people
 prefer to watch
reality
 shows, and from 16 to 34 fewer
people
 watch
reality
 shows.
People
 between 16-24 and 45+ watch
game
 shows. Between 45 and 44
people
 are less interested in
game
 shows. The difference
of
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between
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two
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the two
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graph
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that
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is that
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 the female was chosen
reality
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for reality
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 shows, men
was
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were
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 chosen
game
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for game
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 shows. As
it
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apply
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presented in the chart percentage of
reality
 shows the highest
was
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were
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 chosen by
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the female
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female
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females
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. The lowest was chosen by
male
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the male
a male
show examples
. And in
percentage
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the percentage
show examples
 of
watch
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watched
show examples
game
 shows the highest was chosen by men. The lowest was chosen by women.
According to
 the chart, more women than men selected
reality
 shows.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, reality, game with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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