The charts below shows the percentage of two genres of TV programmes watched by male and female in Australia.
The charts below
shows
the percentage of two genres of TV programmes watched by Change the verb form
show
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in Australia.
We can see in Fix the agreement mistake
females
this
chart’s information four different age groups between 16 and 45+. From 35 to 45 people
prefer to watch reality
shows, and from 16 to 34 fewer people
watch reality
shows. People
between 16-24 and 45+ watch game
shows. Between 45 and 44 people
are less interested in game
shows. The difference of
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between
two
Correct article usage
the two
graph
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graphs
that
the female was chosen Add a missing verb
is that
reality
shows, men Change preposition
for reality
was
chosen Change the verb form
were
game
shows.
As Change preposition
for game
it
presented in the chart percentage of Correct pronoun usage
apply
reality
shows the highest was
chosen by Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Add an article
the female
female
. The lowest was chosen by Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
. And in Add an article
the male
a male
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
watch
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watched
game
shows the highest was chosen by men. The lowest was chosen by women.
According to
the chart, more women than men selected reality
shows.Submitted by dnm.best on
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