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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
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The six charts illustrate the amount of water used for diverse aims in various areas of the world.
Overall
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, it is apparent that agricultural usage shows a vast majority in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, South East
Asia
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, and South
America
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,
while
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 domestic usage represents the lowest percentage in North
America
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 and
Europe
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.
To begin
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 with, the renowned type of
use
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 is agricultural, whilst the least popular is domestic. Agricultural
use
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 accounted for a significant majority: 84% in
Africa
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, 88% in Central
Asia
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, 81% in South East
Asia
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, and 71% in South
America
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. Meanwhile, a small minority illustrated 39% in North
America
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 and 32% in
Europe
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, respectively.
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, domestic
use
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 is the lowest and represented no more than 20% in each area: 19% in South
America
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, 15% in
Europe
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, 13% in North
America
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, 9% in
Africa
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 and 7% for both Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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. Industrial
use
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 showed almost half in
Europe
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, presenting 53% and North
America
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, illustrating 48%. When it comes to other areas, it outlines a tiny fraction: 12% in South East
Asia
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, 10% in South
America
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, 7% in
Africa
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, and 5% in Central
Asia
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, asia, america, europe, use with synonyms.
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