The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map provides information on two possible sites for a new supermarket in
Garlsdon
town
with a population of sixty-five
thousand
people
. The first
site
is on the southwest side of the
town
. In
this
case, the supermarket would be located in the countryside not far from an industrial area. The supermarket would be located between the railway and a main road. Another thing about
this
location is that
this
place is
also
close to another
town
, Hindon, which has a population of about ten
thousand
people
and is located about twelve km from
Garlsdon
. The second
site
is almost in the middle of Garldson
town
and is located in the
town
center
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without a traffic zone. Close to
this
site
, there are housing and industry areas, and right through
this
site
area, there is a crossing railway. One more visible thing, there are two other towns close to
Garlsdon
. On the northwest, there is Brandston with fifteen
thousand
people
and located sixteen km from
Garlsdon
. And to the northeast
twenty five
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km from the
town
there is Cransdon
town
with
population
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a population
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of fifteen
thousand
people
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words garlsdon, town, thousand, people, site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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