This diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summaries the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric

power

station in a day. As we can see,

this

process consists

various

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of various

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stages that

requires

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require

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both natural

resource

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resources

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and high technology to produce

such

enegry

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energy

.

Firstly

, it starts with the flow of the

water

coming from the river into the dam. The

water

will be restored in the

high level

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reservoir during the night because the dam

only

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is only

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open during day time.

Next,

throughout the daylight, the

water

will pass into the

reverible

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reversible

turbines where it is located in the

power

station

whereas

the excess

water

will stay in the

low level

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low-level

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reservoir but after

sunset

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the process will be

opposited

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opposite

opposed

and eventually finds

it

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way

pumping

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to pumping

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the

water

up high between the dam and

power

base.

Followed by

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this

, the generator will operate to pass electricity to

power

lines.

Overall

,

this

operation can work 24 hours without

human

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humans

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to operate

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it.