The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of Australian males and females of all life categories who did frequent physical action in 2010.
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, Australian adults did some kind of physical action in 2010. The largest portion of participants were found to be females aged 45–54, Linking Words
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the smallest chunk was attributed to middle-aged males aged 35–44.
In terms of gentlemen, the highest fee for doing some kind of physical movement made up 52.8% Linking Words
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the ages 15 to 24. The middle ratio of adults aged 45 and over comprised around 45.5%, Change preposition
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the smallest royalty made up 39.5% of adults aged 35 to 44 in 2010.
Focusing on ladies from the ages of doing physical enterprise in the youth range of 15 to 44 declined by around 48.3%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the maturity range of 45 to over increased by around 49.7%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the category that saw the largest participation for men was the smallest for women in those maturity groups.Linking Words
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