The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables compare data about Fairtrade*-labelled
tea
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and pineapples that are sold in 4 several districts in 2 diverse years( 2010 and 2015) per millions of Euros.
Overall
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, the number of
tea
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and Pineapples increased in the period of 5 years;
moreover
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, the best country that had large sales except
tea
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in the second year was Austria.
According to
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the
tea
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chart, in 2010, Austria, which was the main country in
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section, had 4 million euros, but
this
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figure had 4 climbed, but couch on the second level. France was the third one, having the highest jump that could reach both 21 and the first level 2.5.
In addition
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, other countries did have nearly 0.3 raisings.
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, Germany, Netherlands,and Norway respectively at the beginning had 2.8, 2, and 1.8. The Pineapples diagram demonstrates Austria, which not only was the most popular region but
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went up a massive difference of 32, at the start had 16;
furthermore
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, the next ones that were roughly the same as each other were Germany and Norway had approximately 3, and they had nearly 1 reduced. French like the
last
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ones had the same trend, but the Netherlands could move from 1.6 to 6.5 and touched the second level.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • European countries
  • increase/decrease
  • growth/decline
  • trends
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highest/lowest sales
  • figures
  • comparisons
  • time frame
  • consistent growth
  • main trends
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