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The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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THE BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES HOW
ELECTRICITY
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 WAS PRODUCED AND CONSUMED IN DIFFERENT 10 COUNTRIES. LOOKING AT THE GRAPH,
ELECTRICITY
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 PRODUCED AND CONSUMED WERE BY FAR THE MOST IN CHINA, WITH THE OPPOSITE OF
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 BEING TRUE FOR THE KOREAN REPUBLIC,
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 OTHERS DID NOT OBSERVE SIGNIFICANTLY DURING
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 PERIOD. AS FAR AS CHINA IS CONCERNED, THE PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION OF
ELECTRICITY
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 WERE 5398 AND 5,322
BILLION
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KWH
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, RESPECTIVELY, UNITED STATES WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST USER PRODUCING APPROXIMATELY 4
BILLION
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KWH
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 AND CONSUMING JUST UNDER THAT AMOUNT
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ELECTRICITY
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 PRODUCED AND CONSUMED WAS FOURFOLD LOWER THAN UNITED STATES'S
ELECTRICITY
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 WHEN IT COMES TO JAPAN AND OTHER COUNTRIES, JAPAN WAS THE FOURTH HIGHEST USER IN THE RANKING COUNTRY JUST UNDER 1,000
BILLION
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KWH
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 (PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION)
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, INDIA, CANADA, FRANCE, BRAZIL, AND GERMANY WERE AROUND 800 AND 600
BILLION
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KWH
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 AND THE PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION OF
ELECTRICITY
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 OF KOREA REPUBLIC WAS IN THE FINAL STAGE, RANKING JUST UNDER 500
BILLION
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KWH
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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