The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how an
island
has changed following the development of various facilities for visitors.
Overall
, there have been significant constructions
in
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the
island
in terms of accommodation and facilities for tourists. It is noteworthy that these developments have occurred without
anynoticeable
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any noticeable
damage to the trees. The length of the
island
is over 1200 metres
while
its width varies from about 200 to 500 metres in different places. The only significant features before the constructions were a beach in the west and a few palm trees in the eastern and western halves, apart from which the
island
was completely bare. The beach has now been equipped with swimming facilities, and the western woodland is surrounded by a series of huts which are connected to each other and to the beach via footpaths. There is
also
a restaurant in the northern part which is connected to a reception building in the middle of the
island
,
as well as
a new pier to the south, by means of a vehicle track.
Finally
, a larger set of huts
have
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been constructed between the reception and the eastern woodland
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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