You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Australian households consume a significant amount of
energy
for heating and cooling, followed closely by water heating 23%. Interestingly, while
appliances consume less energy
overall
12% for refrigeration and 24% for other appliances, they are responsible for a larger portion of greenhouse gas emissions 16% and 25% respectively. This
suggests that appliances, while
not major energy
users,
are less Remove the comma
apply
energy
efficient than other household functions. It's also
worth noting that lighting 11% energy
use contributes a relatively small proportion of greenhouse gases 7% compared to water heating 23% Change preposition
of energy
energy
use and 25% Change preposition
of energy
emissions
. Change preposition
of emissions
This
indicates that lighting is likely dominated by energy
-efficient technologies like LED bulbsSubmitted by riani.the2 on
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