You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the pie chart
show
us the Change the verb form
shows
percentage
of household
energy
and green gas
in Australia
. The biggest percentage
of greenhouse
gas
was caused by heating and cooling meanwhile the household
energy
caused by heating and cooling is 10% lower. the
water heating is the second Correct article usage
apply
problems
that Fix the agreement mistake
problem
caused
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causes
the
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greenhouse
gas
and the household
energy
caused by the
water heating is 23%. now oppositely the Correct article usage
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caused
of the refrigeration Replace the word
cause
problems
had a bigger percentage
in household
energy
than the green house
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greenhouse
gas
in Australia
. the lighting problems
of household
energy
in Australia
had a bigger percentage
than the produced of green gas
house
in Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Australia
with the
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a
difference
of 4%. and also
the caused
of other appliances in Replace the word
causes
household
energy
had a bigger percentage
than the greenhouse
gas
with the
Correct article usage
a
difference
of 8%. the caused
of the Replace the word
cause
problems
in household
energy
and greenhouse
gas
with the difference
of 1% is cooking with household
energy
has the bigger percentage
there. the smallest percentage
of the 2 main problems
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problems
with the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, household, energy, gas, australia, greenhouse, problems, difference with synonyms.
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