The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the number of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet in a duration starting from 1960 and
continuting
to 2020 .
Correct your spelling
continuing
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest amount of UK citizens that followed a vegan diet is
in the years 1960 to 1980 but it gradually increased in the latter Wrong verb form
was
year
. Also
, after these years the numbers have not had a dramatic rise just a change of numbers here and there .
However
, in the year
2000
the number of adolescents went down clearly with only about 5% of them following the diet . Add a comma
2000,
It is clear that
, after the huge slump in the year
2000 the percentage of people climbed slowlly
but not hugely as it grew to 10 % by the Correct your spelling
slowly
year
2020 .Submitted by aljouri50x50 on
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