The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the comparison of the
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results
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survey which asked people who visited the Parkway Hotel how they evaluated the Change preposition
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hotel’s
customer service
in 2005 and 2010.
It is clearly observed that in 2005 most visitors were satisfied for
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service
, whereas
in 2010 feel good and excellent were the highest proportion.
In detail, in 2005, only 5 per cent of guests were satisfied by the hotel’s
service
, while
this
figure increased by 23% in 2010. In addition
, these figures for rating customer service
as very poor and poor stood at 21% and 15% respectively in 2005. By contrast
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hotel’s
service
declined at
12% and less than one in twenty. Change preposition
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However
, nearly a fifth of visitors were happy to visit the Parkway Hotel in 2005. Conservely, in 2010 the percentage of satisfaction among individuals rose by a quarter.
Also
, in 2005, less than half of visitors rated satisfactory to the hotel’s
services, whereas
that of 2010 was lower at 17%.Submitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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