The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the consumption of three types of fast food
such
as hamburgers
, pizza, and fried chicken
by teenagers from Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
, hamburgers
and fried chicken
have risen significantly over the last
30 years
. On the other hand
, the number of pizzas has dropped abruptly in the same years
.
In 1985, hamburgers
and fried chicken
stood at 10 and 5 numbers of times
eaten per year
by teenagers, in the following years
both foods were increasing gradually. By 2000, hamburgers
and fried chicken
accounted for 40 times
eaten per year
respectively. In 2005, fried chicken
was 60 times
per year
, it stopped reaching a plateau in 2010, and in the next 5 years
, it had a small increase.
On the other hand
, pizza in 1985 was the fastest food eaten by young people accounting for 60 times
eaten. But in the following years
, the number of pizzas consumed declined precipitously. In 2015, only 10 times
eaten per year
was
selected for teenagers.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, chicken, years, times, year with synonyms.
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