Some people prefer to eat at food stands 9 or restaurants. Other people prefer to band prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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eating out or consuming at

home

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become one of the most questioned

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some groups of

people

support the viewpoint of going out and

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yummy foods, others oppose eating out and advocate consuming

food

at

home

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will debate both sides and give my personal hypothesis to it.

To begin

with, it is commonly

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argued by some individuals about

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consumption outside. The first uphold that they bring to support their idea is no need

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for effort

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for cooking.

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, some families frequently go to

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cafes, restaurants and McDonald’s as they do not give their preference to prepare

food

since lack of time widespread among their life. The reason for that

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is they

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always work all day long

hence

they will be fatigued. The second ground is laziness and boredom in

people

’s life. As an example, swarms of

people

reckon cooking is prohibitively boring

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this

they tend to

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lifestyle.

Moreover

, human beings are getting vitally lazy which means they do not have any desire to make a

food

Additionally

, others do advocate eating at

home

and the hypothesis

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they bring to protect their idea is that being at

home

and

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time with family members. As an explanation,

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people

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of people

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have a colossal desire to consume meals with

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family and

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by heart. The other reason is that many individuals prefer

food

made by their

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as it is the most delicious in the world.

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a number of

people

agree

to eat

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that eating

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home

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at home

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is more beneficial.

To conclude

although

, many

people

opine

about

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eating out is more convenient

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while

, others say homemade meals are the best and

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. I discussed both sides in the previous paragraphs and

i

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vitally agree with

people

who eat at

home

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