The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compared data about the
number
of individuals who lived in a specific region participating in 4 categories of sports including
badminton
, basketball, tennis and
rugby
from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, all of the categories except tennis
decreasing
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, all of them remained stable. Between 1985 and 2002, the
number
of local citizens who took part in
badminton
and basketball sports was static, with nearly 50 and 90 respectively. The statistic for tennis slightly increased direction at the start was 150; in 1995, intersected with
rugby
's figure at around 200, and
finally
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the proportion hit 210; The
number
of humans who participated in
rugby
sports decreased manifestly; in 1985 had a peak at 250;
whereas
reached a minimum of 50. It is remarkable that in 1985 the
number
of people who spent time on
rugby
was five times higher than people who spent time on
badminton
;
however
, in 2005, the figures for
rugby
dramatically reached the same as
badminton
at 50.
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