The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The 35-year period saw
changes
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to the suburban
area
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of the town of Fosbury and the urban developments that took place there.
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, there were a number of
changes
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to the buildings and amenities of
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area
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. In terms of the road layout, the main change was the modernization of the road by developing the roundabout. In 1980
this
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area
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had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 2015 two-thirds of residential features had disappeared. The residential accommodation in the northwest underwent
further
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changes
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with blocks of flats and terraced houses, which were replaced by commercial buildings. The
area
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industrialized
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during
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period; the fields have been replaced by warehouses. The
area
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’s sporting facilities have
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been developed into a sports centre.
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, the new amenities
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as car parks had erupted. In summary, the
area
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of Fosbury shown on the maps went through a lot of
changes
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between 1980 and 2015. The number of recreational buildings in the
area
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has increased, but the number of houses has reduced.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Outskirts
  • Urban expansion
  • Infrastructure development
  • Population density
  • Land use transformation
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Green spaces
  • Transportation options
  • Comparison
  • Key development
  • Redevelopment
  • Rural to urban transition
  • Expansion of facilities
  • Infrastructure upgrade
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