The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The 35-year period saw
changes
to the suburban Use synonyms
area
of the town of Fosbury and the urban developments that took place there. Use synonyms
Overall
, there were a number of Linking Words
changes
to the buildings and amenities of Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
area
.
In terms of the road layout, the main change was the modernization of the road by developing the roundabout. In 1980 Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
area
had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 2015 two-thirds of residential features had disappeared. The residential accommodation in the northwest underwent Use synonyms
further
Linking Words
changes
with blocks of flats and terraced houses, which were replaced by commercial buildings.
The Use synonyms
area
industrialized Use synonyms
further
during Linking Words
this
period; the fields have been replaced by warehouses. The Linking Words
area
’s sporting facilities have Use synonyms
also
been developed into a sports centre. Linking Words
Finally
, the new amenities Linking Words
such
as car parks had erupted.
In summary, the Linking Words
area
of Fosbury shown on the maps went through a lot of Use synonyms
changes
between 1980 and 2015. The number of recreational buildings in the Use synonyms
area
has increased, but the number of houses has reduced.Use synonyms
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