The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

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The design describes two possible sites for the bazaar. The picture is of the city of Gardenstone

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a new boutique is planted for the municipality.

Overall

, it can be pointed out from the design countryside is the most area

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housing is the least in the township of Garlsdon.

According to

, the print the second shopping

center

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will be built centre of

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the municipality

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so it is closer to the track. It will be exactly below the line. In comparison, the first outlet will be built countryside between the track and the main way.

In addition

, it’s clear from the graph that the mart will have an exit and entrance to the rail line and main road. The second flea market has two exits to the main road.

However

, it will have only one for the first co-op.

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The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

Many musuems charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to musuems outweigh the disadvantages?

Fewer and fewer people today right by hand using a pen pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with other people through internet. But others against it. Do you think this is positive trend or negative trend.

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.