The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
The design describes two possible sites for the bazaar. The picture is of the city of Gardenstone
while
a new boutique is planted for the municipality.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the design countryside is the most area while
housing is the least in the township of Garlsdon.
According to
, the print the second shopping center
will be built centre of Change the spelling
centre
municipality
so it is closer to the track. It will be exactly below the line. In comparison, the first outlet will be built countryside between the track and the main way.
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the municipality
In addition
, it’s clear from the graph that the mart will have an exit and entrance to the rail line and main road. The second flea market has two exits to the main road. However
, it will have only one for the first co-op.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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