The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
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The design describes two possible sites for the bazaar. The picture is of the city of Gardenstone
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a new boutique is planted for the municipality.
Overall
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, it can be pointed out from the design countryside is the most area
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housing is the least in the township of Garlsdon.
According to
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, the print the second shopping
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will be built centre of
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so it is closer to the track. It will be exactly below the line. In comparison, the first outlet will be built countryside between the track and the main way.
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, it’s clear from the graph that the mart will have an exit and entrance to the rail line and main road. The second flea market has two exits to the main road.
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, it will have only one for the first co-op.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • transportation infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • environmental impact
  • green space preservation
  • noise pollution
  • local wildlife
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • boost to local businesses
  • property values
  • competitive landscape
  • consumer choice
  • community feedback
  • stakeholders
  • support
  • opposition
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