The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.

The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
The histogram shows the number of people born in rural, urban and township
areas
in
Australia
or out of state between 1995 and 2010. In
general
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we can see that the number of people born in
Australia
in a city has changed quite dramatically. The population in urban
areas
increased from 50 to 65, which is not the case for towns and rural
areas
, which decreased by almost half. To summarize the
birth
rate
in
Australia
, we can say that people living in towns and rural
areas
have moved to cities over
this
period of time. If we look at
birth
rates outside
Australia
. We can say that
according to
the data, the
birth
rate
in the city increased by 20, and the
birth
rate
in rural
areas
decreased by 4 times. And the
birth
rate
in towns
also
decreased by half.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, australia, birth, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Migration patterns
  • Population distribution
  • Rural
  • Urban
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Growth rate
  • Settlement patterns
  • Residential categories
  • Urbanization
  • Infrastructure
  • Economic opportunities
  • Lifestyle preferences
  • Residential mobility
  • Urban planning
  • Governmental policies
  • Community impact
  • Data analysis
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