the bar chart shows the number of hours worked per week by men and women in australia in 2007.
The presented column graph compares Australian
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in terms of their weekly working duration in 2007.
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females
Overall
, citizens’ working duration varied from 0 to above 80 hours
. In addition
, residents spending 30-50 hours
per week
were the most prevalent in both genders.
Turning into detail, with nearly 43%, man
working between 30 and 50 Fix the agreement mistake
men
hours
per week
occupied the highest percentage among 5 groups, followed by a figure of exactly 30% for 60
-80 category. Correct article usage
the 60
By contrast
, in comparison to the aforementioned sectors, that of 10
-20 and over 80 Correct article usage
the 10
group
were remarkably lower, with about 12% and 10%, respectively. Meanwhile, Change to a plural noun
groups
male
working less than 10 Fix the agreement mistake
males
hours
per week
accounted for only 5% of total
population.
Regarding Add an article
the total
to
female counterparts, people spending 30-50 Remove the preposition
apply
hours
per week
at work occupied 35%, ranking first among all duration groups, whereas
that of 10
-20 sector was considerably smaller, with approximately 23%. Correct article usage
the 10
In addition
, there was an insignificant difference between 60
-80 and 0-10 Correct article usage
the 60
category
, in which the former’s percentage of about 18% slightly edged out the latter’s, with 15%. Unlike other sectors, the rate of only a tenth revealed that Fix the agreement mistake
categories
fewest
Australian women chose to work more than 80 Correct article usage
the fewest
hours
per week
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