The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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data about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries

during

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9

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the

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USA

and

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same

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in 2004 .

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the bar chart provides the

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highest

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approximately 250.in 2012 .

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USA

and Australia it were equally the

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110 .

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Canada both

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number

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of students

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English speaking

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50 . Moving to the table chart the

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the

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small numbers in two

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Australia increased

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percentage 19 to 24%. On

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Canada rose to 7% percentage consider

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in 2012

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developed the

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UK

during 9

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for foreign students as

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of

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% . In conclusion

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