The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the development of Ryemouth
village
from 1995 to the present. Overall
, the most noticeable change is the transformation of the northeastern part of the village
from agricultural land into a sports complex.
In 1995, the northeastern area consisted of farmland and a forest park with several trees. This
area has now been converted into sports facilities, with a golf course in the north and tennis courts in the south. Additionally
, new houses have been added on both the western and eastern sides of the village
, separated by the main road.
In the southwest, the shop has been converted into a restaurant. A car park has been constructed next to the hotel, while
the café in front of the hotel remains unchanged. The fish market in the southwest has been demolished and replaced with apartments. Furthermore
, two houses in the western part of the village
have been removed. Lastly
, the fishing port in the southern part of the village
has been removed.Submitted by writingbersama on
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