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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the development of Ryemouth
village
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 from 1995 to the present.
Overall
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, the most noticeable change is the transformation of the northeastern part of the
village
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 from agricultural land into a sports complex. In 1995, the northeastern area consisted of farmland and a forest park with several trees.
This
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 area has now been converted into sports facilities, with a golf course in the north and tennis courts in the south.
Additionally
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, new houses have been added on both the western and eastern sides of the
village
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, separated by the main road. In the southwest, the shop has been converted into a restaurant. A car park has been constructed next to the hotel,
while
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 the café in front of the hotel remains unchanged. The fish market in the southwest has been demolished and replaced with apartments.
Furthermore
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, two houses in the western part of the
village
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 have been removed.
Lastly
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, the fishing port in the southern part of the
village
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 has been removed.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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