The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given illustration represents the information about
water
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cycle, which is perceptual
water
circulation from the Earth to
atmosphere
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and vice-versa.
Overall
, the
7 step
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natural cycle begins with
ocean
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evaporating and ends with saline encroachment. The process commences with evaporation of surface
water
, leading to
water
vapour condensation.
Subsequently
, clouds are formed and sedimentation takes place, resulting in
a
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rain. When
water
drops onto the Earth, it runs over
surface
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then
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being
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added to groundwater.
Consequently
, saline intrusion occurs and
water
flaws
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falls
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into
ocean
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and the process begins again.
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