The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.
Two pie charts give information about 7 different
habits
for British
people
which are books, computers, furniture, restaurants, petrol and cars from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, car and food
habits
were significantly value factors for
people
while
reading a book and computers were less preferred by the
UK
people
. At first glance, we can say that cars made up overweight of the total by %43 in the year 1971 ,
on the other hand
, it narrowed to the percentage of 22 in the
UK
in 2001. The consumption of furniture, computers and petrol had the smallest fractions in 1997 respectively %12, %8 and %8 and they almost remained steady in 2011. In the
UK
, restaurant
habits
experienced reducing , because The British
people
were going to restaurants at a ratio of %14,
whereas
they changed their eating
habits
aftermath the restaurants decreased to %7 in 2011. We can observe that one of the growing proportions was food
habits
, it was a smidgen percentage of 14 in 1971 though , it almost accounted for the total by %44 in the
UK
in 2001.
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