The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The diagram below compares the

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of students in gender who register

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different levels of school

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.

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period, tertiary education remained the biggest index in developed countries with 105 and 112 degrees with all two other education,

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in developing provinces it was the lowest indicator on

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that for all

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1998

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students were more than

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,

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about as much as each other but still not enough.

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, by educated state, the gap in enrolling between these two time periods has widened and considerably more students pass to the

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country than in developing nations. As can be seen from the graph, the

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of children increased in 1998 in all statements

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but rose dramatically in the

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republic.

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between 1990 and 1998 saw a sharp growth and in 1998 the

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more than they did in 1990.