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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
#levels #post-school #qualifications #australia #proportion #men #women
The diagram below compares the
amount
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number
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 of students in gender who register
in
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for
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 different levels of school
degree
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degrees
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.
Overall
, during
this
eight year
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 period, tertiary education remained the biggest index in developed countries with 105 and 112 degrees with all two other education,
while
 in developing provinces it was the lowest indicator on
this
 chart. It must
noticed
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 that for all
time
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the time
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1998
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in 1998
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 students were more than
1990
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in 1990
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,
as well as
 in higher education only
this
 fulfilled the plan,
while
 for secondary schools
was
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there was
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 about as much as each other but still not enough.
However
, by educated state, the gap in enrolling between these two time periods has widened and considerably more students pass to the
full grown
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 country than in developing nations. As can be seen from the graph, the
amount
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 of children increased in 1998 in all statements
,
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apply
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 but rose dramatically in the
expand
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 republic.
The menstruation
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 between 1990 and 1998 saw a sharp growth and in 1998 the
graduate
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graduates
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was
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were
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 more than they did in 1990.
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