The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart showcases the number of
sales
of
the
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variety of products in a day at Brisk Café during the
winter
and
summer
.
Overall
, it can be observed that Hot coffee and Soup remained a popular choice in
winter
while
commodities like Ice cream and Iced coffee
was
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were
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in high demand in
summer
.
Sales
for Salad remained steady in both seasons. Beverages were recorded to have the most
sales
in both
winter
and
summer
, the Hot
coffe
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coffee
was the most consumed item with around 70 servings in
winter
and approximately
up to
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30 servings in
summer
. The Iced coffee witnessed a significant surge in purchases, peaking at 40 servings a day,
however
, its
sales
dropped to its lowest to 10 per day in cold weather.
Although
the
sales
for all the products fluctuated in both
the
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seasons, surprisingly, the
sales
for Salad remained constant
through
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throughout
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the seasons
while
the Ice cream
sales
experiencing
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experienced
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slight
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a slight
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increase.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, winter, summer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average daily sales
  • Selected food items
  • Seasonal variation
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Comparison
  • Preferences
  • Anomalies
  • Promotions
  • Stock adjustment
  • Seasonal influence
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