The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph gives information about Linking Words
modification
of the price of three Correct article usage
the modification
materials
in 2014.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
nickel
fluctuated in Use synonyms
this
period, Linking Words
while
the proportion of Linking Words
copper
relatively remained unchanged.
In January, Use synonyms
although
, the fraction of Linking Words
nickel
began at 6%, it decreased dramatically to 1% in March. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
percentage
of zinc reached a peak at 3% in Use synonyms
february
. From March to April, the proportion of Change the capitalization
February
nickel
and Use synonyms
copper
showed stable changes at 1% and around 0.6, respectively, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
copper
went down slightly to approximately 1.7%.
Between March and July, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
copper
overtook the other two Use synonyms
materials
at nearly -0.5. Use synonyms
Moreover
, from July to September the three Linking Words
materials
remained constant. The figure for Use synonyms
nickel
surged to 1% in November. Throughout the entire period, the proportion of Use synonyms
copper
doubled from 1% to 2%, and accounted highest Use synonyms
percentage
compared to the other two Use synonyms
materials
.Use synonyms
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