The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.
The graphics illustrate
money
spent by foreigners on their visit to the UK and the reasons for their visits. The values are depicted from 1980 to 2010.
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, over the years, there has been a varied increase in the Linking Words
money
spent by visitors from 1980 to 2010. Notably, the most amount of Use synonyms
money
was spent right after 1995, followed by 2006. The cause of their visits Use synonyms
remain
relatively similar in 2010 as in 1980.
Even though, starting with just over 7500 million pounds in 1980, these visitors spent more than 10500 million pounds in the year 2010. Over Wrong verb form
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most
amount of Add an article
the most
money
was spent in the year 1996, with 12000 million pounds.
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However
, most people visited the UK as tourists in 1980 and 2010, with 44.1% and 39.1%, respectively. Linking Words
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, in 1980, around 20% Linking Words
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for seeing
their loved ones, Change preposition
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and other reasons. In 2010, work trips and travelling to see family and friendsChange preposition
for word-related
,
increased to around 25%.Remove the comma
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