Write a letter to a bookstore manager who is living in another city. Ask him/ her to make available a book that you are interested in. In you letter. - What book you are looking for? - Why you need this book. - How you plan to purchase the book
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
email regarding an important book
that I need for my study plan at university. I have been looking for this
book
for 2 weeks and am still unable to find it in my city. Therefore
, I kindly request that you offer this
book
in your store.
The book
is called 'Creative Writing' written by John Smith, who is an American writer, and famous for his academic writing. It's the second edition for intermediate level
students. Add a hyphen
intermediate-level
In addition
to that, the book
is highly recommended by most of my teachers in college and got a high rate on the Internet. This
is why it's out of stock from all the bookstores in my area.
I need this
book
because it's required for me in order to pass the final writing exam. The test is set at the end
of the year, and I have to learn how to write an essay before I finish the foundation year. Also
, my writing skills are very weak and need to be developed. Therefore
, I need the book
as soon as possible.
Furthermore
, I would be very grateful if your store provided a Visa payment, because I believe that online payment is the most comfortable method for me instead
of cash. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
If you need any further
information please contact me by email.
Kind regards,Submitted by noufxmut on
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To make your request even clearer, you could mention if you're willing to pay for shipping or prefer to collect the book in person.
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The letter opens with a clear and polite introduction explaining the purpose of the request.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the request, maintaining a logical structure throughout the letter.
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The tone is appropriate and respectful, which is suitable for a formal request.
greeting and closing
The closing line is polite and leaves the communication open for further contact.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite