The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table chart shows that from 7:30 to 10:30 O'clock the coffe
shop
has served more pastries
in addition
cooffee than the other menu, I think its beacuse in the morning people love to drink a coffee
with a few pastries
to get up and be more powerful.
On the one hand, From 10:30 to 2:30 the coffee
shop
made a sandwiches more than pastries
as long as its the afternoon period, considering it is a lunch time so the costemers wanted to eat a perfect meal.
On the other hand
, from 2:30 to 5:30 the coffee
shop
served like the morning I think that becuse the people started to become more sleepy so they get a coffee
and more pastries
.
Finally
, on a night time the cooffe shop
served coffee
aswell but with more sanwiches, I wonder why costumers do not get a tea.Submitted by weam11200 on
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