The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegitables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of five different types of fruit and vegetables which are usually consumed by UK people per day over a
period
of eight years between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
it can be clearly seen that women and men dominated eating all types of foods in the UK over the period
, whereas
children were the least consumed.
Observing the chart in more detail, women became the most consumers in all years from 2001 to 2008 at around 23 to 35. Interestingly, in 2006 it was the highest rate of the total number.
Men ended up becoming the second rank of the most eater over the period
of time where it accounted for 18 to 27. In addition
, this
figure reached a peak at roughly 27 in 2006.
In contrast
, children always comprised the least consumer from the beginning of
the end of the Change preposition
to
period
. More specifically, this
was between 13 and 22 and peaked at 22 in 2007Submitted by mfmakarim55 on
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