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The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph provides data from the great
products
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 of one nation manufactured in a variety of categories in 2016 compared with 2015.
Overall
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, most objects manufactured have experienced an upward trend over the given period, with the exception of gems and jewellery.
By contrast
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, the gems and jewellery sector dropped in 2016. Looking at the bar graph more closely, one can see that petroleum
products
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 rose by nearly 2 per
cent
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point
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 from 60 per
cent
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 in 2015 to almost 62 per
cent
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, followed by agricultural
products
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 and textiles with approximately 1 per
cent
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point
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 of agricultural
products
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 and nearly 4 per
cent
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point
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 of textiles.
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, engineered goods went up approximately 3 per
cent
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point
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 from 58 per
cent
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 in 2015 to 61 per
cent
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 in 2016.
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, gems and jewellery decreased by almost 2 per
cent
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point
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 over the given 1-year period. In conclusion, most
products
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 have slightly changed 1 per
cent
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point
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 over the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, cent, point with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • Categories
  • Percentage change
  • Trend
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Overall performance
  • Sector
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Trade figures
  • Economic indicator
  • Market dynamics
  • Infographics interpretation
  • Statistical representation
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