M. The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate a small
village
in the west of Ireland in 2000 and at the present time.
Overall
, a rural area
with farmland has been changed into a more residential area
with more housing and parks. The southern part of the village
used to be a commercial area
with a dock for fishery, which was replaced by restaurants and the dock was completely removed from the sea.
The most significant changes are that the large farmland on the north-west side of the village
was replaced by a park and that the dock and the markets in the southern of the village
disappeared and there are currently up to four restaurants available along the street which spreads from the west to the east of the village
.
The residential area
was enlarged with additional houses on the further
extended streets located in the centre of the village
and those located in the north-west. Furthermore
, a car park was built at the end
of the streets in the southwest.Submitted by kana_ayaki on
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